the intimacy was vivid :)

Hetero male POV isn't usually my first choice of story perspective, but i enjoyed the literary style and some hot phrases.

a powerful glimpse onto a butch dom's/fem sub's play flow in progress. well done in setting up readers with enough to imagine and wanting more.

well written with enough details about characters to enable investing in them as people. from the description i knew it would push my edge re: the homophobic dynamics in the story setting, and i was definitely uncomfortable with the introduced elements of the fraternity brothers' ways of interacting. but the oral sex and descriptions of the boys' physical and emotional reactions to each other were hot.

would've enjoyed another turn of this story exploring more of the guys' play dynamics!

well done the length it is, I'd also enjoy expanding it a bit more. good tease!