Story Reviews

I enjoyed the set up, the slow observation of the heist, then the intensity picked up like a torrent, a fast moving stream in the mountains. The cat fight was intense, and then the final line might have been predictable, but who cares,? Yep, she got got!

I love tiny dashes of colour like this in a story: simple, exquisitely visual, graphic. The nameless woman comes alive.

Being an aficionado of cafés and spilt coffee myself, I liked the lusty quick energy of this piece. You lost track of your pronouns, but that's an easy fix, next time.